AICE Media Studies AS- Rudo, H

      Today  I made the minor edits that I needed to improve my film.       On Premiere Pro, I increased the volume of one of my scenes because a   student talked about it being too quiet. I deleted the last four seconds of my film because a peer suggested that it might not have even been necessary. And, I created a copy of my original film in case I didn't like the edits that I made.     I still must decide whether I want to a dd onto my film or  not. The problem is that my film comes off as more of a  television show rather than an actual movie.  However, when  my peers were  giving suggestions on how to fix it, those edits  would have made my film more like a drama rather than a comedy.     I plan to make my final decision by the end of the month, February 2021, so that I will have time to make those edits before it is time to submit.        

     Today  I presented my film to my class and received feedback. Most of the feedback that I received were positive, but there  are  still improvements that I need to include.      The first statements I received were all from fellow classmates and were all positive. One person state d that they liked  the sound I used to emphasize the footsteps. Another person shared that they enjoyed my backgro und music for the typography. They described it as “fun”, which is what I was aiming for. A lot of the comments was that  my film  was cute, and I am glad people thought of it that way.      Now for my improvements. I had one  minor problem in which  a  person sa id  that in one of my scenes I need ed  to make the audio louder.  My other piece of feedback was to make my film seem more like a film rather than a TV show series. A peer ga ve me several ways to correct this problem, like ...